Lore talk:Meet the Character - Primate Artorius

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Blurb?[edit]

Unlike some of the blurbs on other ESO web articles, the removed intro is written from an in-universe perspective and should probably be treated as an integral part of the document. None of the other texts had that kind of opening. It seems a little arbitrary to me to chop bits out simple because they don't fit the narrative. —Legoless (talk) 17:34, 15 December 2016 (UTC)

Its an odd one. The paragraph starts off in-universe as if it were Grand Sermonizer Fithia talking (which is why I was hesitant to remove it), but then suddenly an unspecified "We" addresses the reader (We invite you to take a close look into the...) - that made it seem like a typical Zenimax intro blurb. I'm not fussed if its added back in - it just doesn't feel like its part of the text/flyer. --Jimeee (talk) 18:05, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
It's definitely not part of the flyer, but for the purposes of archiving the Meet the Character series I feel we should keep it. —Legoless (talk) 20:11, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
Ok, for archival purposes, I'll add it back in - but outside of the shaded box, so the flyer remains its own thing. --Jimeee (talk) 09:25, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
Looks good! —Legoless (talk) 11:40, 16 December 2016 (UTC)